How to Write an IELTS Discussion Essay (Both Views Essay) at Band 7

Discussion essays ('Discuss both views and give your own opinion') are one of the trickiest Task 2 types because test-takers often forget to state their own opinion, or they give it too late.

Common mistake

Writing 2 body paragraphs (one for each view) without stating your own view in the introduction or conclusion. This scores Band 5 for Task Response because the question is not fully answered.

The structure

Introduction

1. Paraphrase the topic.
2. State BOTH views exist.
3. State YOUR view clearly. ('Although some argue X, I believe Y is more persuasive because…')

Body paragraph 1 — View 1 (the view you find less persuasive) Present the opposing view fairly, with a reason and example. Do not attack it — just describe it.

Body paragraph 2 — View 2 (your preferred view) Present this view more fully — give two reasons and an example. Since this is your view, develop it more.

Conclusion Restate both views. Restate your position. You can add a recommendation.

Language for discussing two views

• Presenting view 1: 'Those who believe… argue that…', 'Proponents of this position claim…'
• Transitioning: 'On the other hand…', 'From a different perspective…'
• Presenting your view: 'Personally, I am more persuaded by…', 'In my view, the stronger argument is…'